Friday, October 7, 2011
Dragon Chase
The chilled air burned against A.C. already blood red cheeks. White blankets melting away from the blazing inferno being spat towards him. Terror filling every pour of his body and the forest green, scaled dragon sped after him. A.C.’s feet crunch rapidly on the icy ground as sleet and rain slammed into his already frozen face. In all his 16 years, A.C. has never seen a more blood crazed demon before.
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you should describe more about the "demon".
ReplyDeleteThis has very good word choice in the details. You have started your hook with A.C. being in peril, which is a nice way to draw the reader in to see what will happen to him. Well done!
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